Too Close for Comfort

was in her room, She was meeting up with her friends at school she left the house and turned round the corner and saw the house across from for her was now sold, she wondered who had bought it apart from it being really old it was lovely place she walked past and was greeted by her three best friends , and . They usually walked to school together and were talking about what they were doing for the summer holidays that would begin in two days time. and were going together on holiday as there parents were best friends, was going to her Gran's for a couple of days which meant was left alone or so she thought. When they got near the school they all separated to go to there classes. had Mr Mathews he never liked her he always seemed to pick on her for no apparent reason. Once school was finished.

made her way back to her house with her friend’s see had this idea of being in a band and well she had finally made her dream come true. was the singer / lead guitarist, was the lead singer and the writer, was on the bass and on the drums.

As they got near her house saw the removal van parked on the corner. “ you’ve got new neighbours” said , “I wonder if they are fit.” “what are you like” said and said at the same time. “I think we should go over and introduce ourselves” said . “good idea” said the rest of the girls. They crossed the road he said quietly “Ahh that’s more like it fit girls at last” the boy said as he watched them cross the road.

“Hey” said “hi” said the boy he had an accent. “are you the new neighbours” asked. “Yeh I’m my three mates are in side if you want to come in and introduce yourselves properly. “The girls walked up the path with in front of them. “Guys you in” there was silence “fine then I will just need to chat to these 4 fit ladies to myself”. As soon as he mentioned ladies the house came alive. Three boys came running down the stairs were in the living room shouted. They all came to a halt when they saw the girls. said as the boys came in this is , , and and girls this is , , and hi’s were said all around.

“So what do you do for a living” said “we’re in a band called Mcfly we’re not that big at the moment but we not been signed and we are now living in here.” “Would you like to stay at our house for pizza” asked, “Actually” said “aren’t we meant to be rehearsing for a performance for the school tomorrow”, “oh yeah I totally forgot sorry guys we need to get back our band playing tomorrow at school”. “Your in a band” said the boys totally shocked “yeh” said , “what instruments do you play” asked , “ plays the drums, plays the electric guitar” “so do I” said “and I play the bass” “sounds awesome” said . “Dudettes you’ll need to let us here you play some time” said . “Maybe when the rest of the girls come back from holiday then okay.” “It’s a date” said I blushed. Once the door shut on the other side the girls started talking about the boys. “They are all pretty fit” said the all agreed. “I really like ”, “I really like ”, “ for me” said “and guess am left with ” joked . They reached ’s house and jammed for a bit.

Over in the lad flat the boys were discussing the girls. “ pretty fit” said , said “she’d never fancy you”, “Look who talking, as if would ever come near you.” “I think pretty hot” said “and got a sense of humour. thank god fletch let us move in here,” The boy’s all agreed with “looks like we going to get on with these fit girls and the best bit is they only live across the street no exercise needed,” “what are you like” laughed all the other guys. Just like ’s band the guys decided to jam for a bit.

The next morning came and as usual couldn’t be bothered getting out her bed it was only when her mum threatened her with a cup of cold water being thrown over her she decided to get up. She grabbed a slice of toast from her brother’s plate and got ready for school. Since it was the last day the teacher told all the pupil’s could dress casually as for she got her tight converse jeans, with her pink t-shirt and quick silver hoodie. She looked at her watch oh great she was going to be late again and her friends would have left her now to walk to school alone. She grabbed her drum sticks shoved them in her coat pocket her vans bag with all her jotters, in it and left the house.

She started to walk when she heard a voice call her name it was . “Were are you off to in such a hurry” he asked “am late for school” replied “jump in I’ll give you a lift” said , “really” said “I don’t want to put you out your way.” “I wouldn’t let any fit girl walk by and presides it will keep happy.” “What do you mean by that” asked “nothing” he said. She made her way across the street and jumped in the back of his mini cooper. She then saw and coming out of the house. ran to the car and jumped in the back with witch meant need to sit in the front to his disappointment.

was making jokes up and be time got to school she was in fits of laughter. “Well good luck for you performance” said the boys “yeah thanxs” said . got out of the car and help carry her bags until she got to the gates , “Thank you” she said and kissed him on the check. went red and said really fast “fancycommingon adatewith me”. looked “say that slowly I don’t understand.” “Fancy coming on a date with me” said clearly this time. “Yeah of course I would” she said. “Okay I’ll picked you up tomorrow night at half seven at your house” “okay see you then” said and walked into the school. came back to the car smiling, “he’s pulled her” said and entered the car. “So you and going out” said . “yeah” said “that’s ten pounds you and own me” said, and . and with that drove off.

got into class and saw , and all talking obviously about there performance or the boys they met last night and judging by the way was smiling she knew it would be boys. “Hey girls” said "Hey" the girls replied "why you so late" the girls asked, “I over slept and gave me a lift, made some jokes and the best bit is am now going on a date with tomorrow” all the girls screamed they were happy for her “now then what are you going to were” asked her. “Am thinking of wearing jeans a top”. “No” shouted “your wearing a skirt heals a low cut top. It’s a date for god sake not a friend’s day out”. “Okay” said “Can you come shopping with me so you can help me” “of course” they all replied “what are friends for”. “ now you decide to join us very kind I would normally give you detention but since it’s the last day of school I let you off” “thanxs Mrs Stirling” said. They gave there performance and everyone wanted more of the girls but sadly it was time for the holidays to begin and that meant for could have more time with her new to be boyfriend.

After school the girls headed straight for the town and after trying 10 different shops the finally found the perfect clothes for the perfect date. was going away with her gran but she asked to phone her later and to find out how her date went. hugged goodbye she was going to miss her even if it was only for a few days. and had promised to help her get ready for the date. She would repay the favour by putting a word in for each of them. The girl’s holiday wasn’t until nine so they could help put her make up on and do her hair up. The girls left Leanne now to put on her final touches and left for their holiday.

It was half seven now was unrecognizable she had a black skirt a pencil shirt that showed all her curves in the right places, and some high heels her hair was curly. The door bell rang and was feeling more nervous now her heart kept beating faster and faster. She got to the door and opened it when saw he whispered in her ear “you look really beautiful” “thanxs” replied. “Mum that’s me away now don’t wait up for me” and with that she closed the door. “So where are you taking me” asked , “It’s a surprise” “okay” said he took her hand into his and they walked down the street.

They came to the local park all of child hood memories were there. took her hand and walked down a grassy bank there in front of her was a picnic basket. “Your friends told me you would like this” he said couldn’t believe her luck. opened a bottle of wine and they sat and talked ate and drank it was if had knew him all her life. then asks the question that she wanted to here “would you like to be my girlfriend.” “Yes” hugged him and then they kissed passionately underneath the Shinning stars. “Wow that was amazing” all could say was “mmmmmmmm”

“ can you do me a favour” asked “yes what” he asked “can you put in a word for the girls for me , Each of them fancy the other lads.” “Didn’t they tell you” “no what” asked, “ asked out she said yeah, asked and they spoke every since she left for her Gran’s and as for well him and are taking things slow.”

“Oh good” said “now we all happy” and they kissed again. They packed the picnic basket up and he walked her home to her door “good night ” and he kissed her one more time “night ” she whispered. She spent the next few days with Mcfly well in particular and it wasn’t long until was back cuddling “since when did you two become an item” blushed “em the same time you and became one” he said.. The girls came over every day watching the boys play their music and the girls showed off there skills to them.

One day came off the phone and called the others into the kitchen “we been signed guys” the girls started screaming and crying and hugged each of their boyfriends. “I got to phone ” said “and I ” said . “We are so happy for you guys.” and said at the same time they gave them a cuddle each. never even phoned once while he was away all the other boys phoned there girlfriends so couldn’t find the reason he couldn’t . The thing is loved but she never told him and was planning to tell him tonight at the club “who up for a party” asked “we all are” everyone replied “okay lets go”. They went to a club called text and got the first orders. After many drinks pulled up to the dance floor all the boys had adapted the same position as they were really close and whispered into ’s ear “I love you,”

then stopped Dancing “ there’s something I got to say to you. I don’t know how to tell you this I really love you but I been cheating on you with another girl am so sorry.” her world had came crashing down she thought he was the one she was meant to spend her life with and now it was all gone, tear started prickling down her eyes “get away from me ” all her friends were watching her “you lying cheat I hate you I never want to see you again.” “ what wrong” the girls asked “I now know why he ain't been calling me to busy shagging some slut.” The guys all turned to , “how could you do it to her she our best friend and now she might not want to talk to us ever again.” Over the next few weeks stayed in her room she wouldn’t leave it she didn’t want to speak to anyone even though the guys said they be there if she wanted to talk. He wrote the song it was to tell his true feelings.

I never meant the things I said
To make you cry can I say I’m sorry
It’s hard to forget and yes I regret
All these mistakes.
I don’t know why your leaving me
But I know you must have your reasons
There’s tears in your eyes I watch as you cry but I getting late

Was I invading in on your secrets
Was I too close for comfort
You’re pushing me out when I wanted in
What was I just about to discover when I got too close for comfort
Am driving you home guess I’ll never know

Remember when we scratched our names
Into the sand and told me you love me
And now that I find you changed your mind I’m lost for words.
And everything I feel for you
I wrote down on once piece of paper
The one in your hand you wont
Understand how much it hurts to let you go

All this time you’ve been telling me lies
Hidden in bags that are under your eyes
And when I ask you I knew I was right
But if you turn your back on me now
When I need you the most
But you chose to let me down, down, down

Wont you think about what you’re about
To do to me and back down

Was I invading in on your secrets
Was I too close for comfort
You’re pushing me out when I wanted in
What was I just about to discover
When I got too close for comfort
Am driving you home
Guess I never know.

wrote on the piece of paper ‘I love you always have always will. I just hope you’re happy then he walked to the post box and posted the letter along with the song, Am sorry for all the pain I caused you. Will you forgive me xx

was sitting at his mum’s house since the rest of the guys had kicked him out after what he did to . Mean while had read his letter over and over again was she going to forgive him after her had. He deserved everything he was getting no friends, no music being made and kept telling her mind she was crazy he cheated on you are you going to forgive him after everything he’s done.

went out and walked up the path in to the boy’s house she opened the door and went into the living room “were is ” she asked them. The guys and girls all looked shocked “were is he” repeated. spoke “ I don’t think you should see him in the state your in” “for the last time guys were is he”. “He at his mum’s” said looked at her and ran out of the house.

She needed to find him and tell that she understands and tell him that she loves him. She finally made it ’s House and knocked the door “is in” his mum said “yes he up in his room go on up dear.” “Thanks”

raced up stairs to find feeling sorry for him self. “Hey can I come in” looked up he came over to “am so sorry for hurting you I never knew I love you but after I cheated on you I realised what I done and that I regret it all” . “I know you do I love you so much and I want to be with you forever I promise” “ if you take me back I will never hurt you again, you’re the one for me and I can see that now.”

Come on Lets get you back to the Mcfly house were you belong. said as she kissed him on the head.